[MJ Fans]: Do you like my poem about MJ?

Another Part of Me was my favorite song
But with your music, nothing could ever go wrong
Since the days in the Jackson 5
Your voice and dancing came alive
Into Thriller and Off The Wall
Everyone knew you were just too cool
The media treated like a freak
And tried to make you become weak
The fans love you and stuck by you
We loved you and you loved us, too
Now every time I listen to your songs
My eyes start to water and I know something is wrong
Tears roll down my cheek and I start to cry
Because my hero just had to die
Your up in Heaven and resting well
But my emotions are high, just like I fell
They keep saying ‘get over it’ and you’ll be fine
And I say ‘it’s not your soul, it’s mine’
The days and night just keep getting better
That’s why I love Michael, and I will forever

What are your thoughts, people?
Star me if you like it!

18 Comments For This Post

  1. Rups C Says:

    Well done!
    I love it.
    very imaginative, I could never write a poem like that (I just stick to my letters)

    Well done!
    I bet he’s reading it in Heaven
    xx

  2. ANOTHER PART OF ME Says:

    LOL, I’m in the first line!

    HOW DO YOU FEEL?

    Just jokin….

    Aww, that’s so sweet. Err, now I have goosebumps lol. If MJ could see that, I’m sure he would be very touched.

    Now every time I listen to your songs
    My eyes start to water and I know something is wrong
    Tears roll down my cheek and I start to cry
    Because my hero just had to die

    That’s my fave part. Dude, Rups C’s letters, Stranger In VA’s stories… Your poems..

    I just don’t know where you get any of this talent.

    edit:

    Oh, stop thumbing me down!

  3. YOU ROCK MY WORLD- R.I.P MJ Says:

    its awesome

  4. George T Says:

    We all miss him.

  5. cherry babe Says:

    !it is nice!!!

  6. Dannii Says:

    This is a very nice poem, the best poem i’ve heard about him so far.
    He would love it, if he read it.

    R.I.P

  7. Tee.Dee Says:

    wow i really really like it
    its got some amazing parts in it :)
    starr

    well done MJ would have love this so much

  8. ☼Penelope☼ Re-Add Says:

    Obsessed much?
    You have talent, don’t waste it on poems about celebrities

  9. The Girl With Kaleidoscope Eyes Says:

    That’s beautiful! i mean, that was REALLY GOOD! =D

  10. R.I.P Michael Jackson! Says:

    THAT POEM IS AH-MAZZ-ING!
    SERIOUSLY IT WAS REALLY, REALLY, REALLY GOOD!
    IT’S SO LIKE TOUCHING, AND EVERY WORD.. LIKE.. AHH. I DONT KNOW WHAT TO SAY IT WAS REALLLY GREAT!
    :)

    R.I.P MJ

  11. melissa Says:

    No, get lost.

  12. ☠GhostOfJaneDoe☠ Says:

    Shouldn’t this be in the poetry section?

  13. ☮ megan Says:

    Wow, I love it! You’re definitely talented :)
    I could never write something like that. Keep that poem forever, okay?

  14. SmoothCriminal:Sana Says:

    That’s amazing.
    Well done =]

  15. Official MJ Fan Girl ™ Says:

    Yeah, it was really good. Good job.

  16. John Says:

    5 out of 5 that was amazing you really write that should become famous!!

  17. Break of Dawnie ♥ Says:

    Really nice. :)

  18. TH-RocksŦ misses MJ. Says:

    Beautiful Poem!

    Star!!

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